Ultimate Galactic Cosmic Sailor Everything

I really like this, Creating a Mary sue character deliberately can be both fun, and exhausting because the entire time your doing it, the half of your brain that's writes well is screaming 'No stop fix it fix it!'

Over all I love the idea of combining everything, That's one I haven't seen before and I like the concept. The coloring is lovely and shading is very well done, your line work is neat and smooth with only one or two hiccups that Unless you look really closely aren't very noticeable.

Now for some, suggestions. first and foremost is the skirt. The flow of the fabric is great but, it's to much. if you look at the way the skirt curve upwards, if you stop and think 'how would that look if there was no billowing wind. that half of the skirt is going to hang a lot longer, do you see what I'm saying? when your working with wind blowing clothing you have to be careful not to Over draw the bit that's billowing. this was something I had trouble with myself for the longest time. I found watching coats and scarves billowing in the wind helped a lot.

My only other suggestion would be on the wand. it's design is crooked, when working on something like that it's a good idea to do a faint sketch in pencil first then a slightly darker pencil, use a ruler and once it's well aligned *turn your paper to see it at different angles* then pen it out.

Anyway I'm done. Point being, I think it's very lovely and with a bit more work on a couple aspects I think your proving to be a great artist, good luck with the contest <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>