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Smash: Forward Tilt

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My commissioner has failed to contact me, so I'm placing my second hand-embroidered Smash Peach outfit now available on my Etsy! www.etsy.com/listing/244966006…

Why this pose? Have you played smash? She does this as a ground-based attack. It's beautiful and so princess like. I wanted to do Peach Bomber but barbie's body does not bend that way.

Her crown does legitimately stay on as she hangs upside down. It is bound to a clear plastic clip.

Dress is cotton base with lace and gem accents. All embroidery is done by hand with metallic floss. Gloves are spandex with a crystallized gem "ring". Crown is metallic costume fabric with acrylic gems.
Image size
2204x2621px 1.77 MB
Make
Sony
Model
C6606
Shutter Speed
1/40 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
50
Date Taken
Jul 18, 2015, 2:29:41 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This is one of my first critiques, try and go a little easy please <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/>
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You did absolutely wonderful creating such an elegant dress. Fabric looks to be perfectly stable, and the golden lining as well as sleeves and lace look to be amazing as well.

Gloves and crown are some nice touch up features, jewel on the dress seems complete, and a wonderful...um.. "Puffiness" for sleeves.

Focusing on how you copied her brawl dress I feel as if certain colors must be a be more brighter if possible. But saying this, I do feel like some parts can be darker as well. The background fits perfectly with the pose, and colors for peach.

Now on to pose, I say that her expression looks a bit... blank. Not saying it needs to be more done on, I will just say that maybe taken at a different angle would have been acceptable.

I didn't put much into originality because it seems like this idea has been used before, but this one has been a perfect example if anyone wanted to try and create their own with a model. I loved how you based it on one of her smash bros. attacks though, genius idea. Vision is very well done, and a perfect for impact. Technique seems to line up with it, but I'm a bit picky about stable ground.

in other words, I hope to see more of these poses if ever decided. Fantastic job.